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Writer's pictureRobert Giron

Better Times

by Mark Wisniewski


There were at least thirty hornets in my medicine chest, which my landlord insisted I keep closed until the exterminator opened it, so I hadn’t brushed my teeth in two days. The exterminator, who my landlord said was a woman, didn’t show the day she was supposed to, and then she was supposed to show the following morning—before I left for work—and now, on that following morning, I was at work, which meant I’d needed to leave my apartment unlocked for her, which I didn’t like. Everyone knows an unlocked door means you could get robbed, but what got me most was I’d probably never see the exterminator—and there’d go a chance for me to talk to a woman other than the one who always came to the cemetery.


That’s where I worked, the cemetery. How the exterminator could have shown at my apartment before my shift still bothers me. My landlord knew I left home at four-thirty a.m. to get to the cemetery by five, when any excavation needed to start. My boss Rich believed no one wants to see digging in a cemetery, so we had to finish all excavation before six, sixty-thirty tops. Anyway as I’d showered before work that morning, I knew the exterminator would never appear before I left, but still I sort of hoped she would, which then left me grumpy, maybe even downright pissed at my landlord for messing with me like that. You know: How can you lie to a tenant as ideal as me when you know I’ll know you’ll be lying?


And then there I was, at work, still grumpy, though there was no excavation scheduled, just leaf and littered item removal until lunch and then, after lunch, probably weed-wacking, but John Monilon wouldn’t know until Rich rolled in and told us for sure.


John Monilon was one of those co-workers who’s almost a complete friend. I’d sometimes think, while we’d be for instance watering sod, that one day we’d do something together after punch-out, like bowling or watching a game at the minor league baseball stadium you could see on the cemetery’s highest hill, but somehow this never happened. You think you’ll do something with a person like that, since there, at work, you and this person discuss yourselves so much this person knows all about you, like how one of your big toenails fell off for no reason, and you can laugh with this person, hard sometimes, but when it comes down to the last minute of a shift, while you’re each holding a time card and waiting for the clock’s final tick, you realize you and this person will part ways again, John Monilon off to a bar to eat a burger and drink beer and try for sex even though he has herpes and went to jail for dealing drugs, you back home to eat tuna and rice before you might browse through your stamps. Yes, I keep stamps, and, yes, I know stamp collecting isn’t the best hobby for a guy who wants to talk to a woman other than one who always comes to a cemetery, but it’s a truth about me.


At least it didn’t help when I tried those over-the-phone dating lines. I should say right now that, through those lines, I actually have talked to women other than the one who always comes to the cemetery, but those conversations, when I’m honest with myself, don’t count. For one thing, none ever lasted for more than fifteen seconds, usually because I’d lose nerve and hang up, once because I said “I save stamps” after the woman, whose name was Cheryl, asked me to tell her about myself. I still think it was rude for her to answer my response with silence followed by the tiniest laugh, but my experience with her did teach me that, if I ever do get into a conversation, a real conversation, with a woman other than the one who always comes to the cemetery, stamps are a topic I should avoid.


Unless maybe the woman raises it. And, yes, I’ll admit I have wished for a woman out there, in the non-cemetery world, who loves stamps and wouldn’t mind talking to me, but this wish, I know, could prove undesirable.


Have you tried the internet? you might be thinking, and in fact that’s what John Monilon once asked, and my answer was (and will always be) that if I’d meet a woman through the internet, she wouldn’t count either, because what I want isn’t intercourse but instead the satisfaction of having physically approached a non-cemetery woman, talked with her, and parted with her knowing we were both on better terms than we were before my approach. Maybe I’m old-fashioned, but that’s all I want. John Monilon says I’m what shrinks call asexual, which, if you ask him, means I’ll never have intercourse because my testicles won’t cooperate. Between you and me, John Monilon might be right about this, but I’d never tell him so, because saying “Yeah, I’m asexual” to someone could, as I see it, end any chance that I am sexual—and, as I understand things, if I really am asexual, I’ll probably never belong to any true family—not the one that got rid of me, not the foster ones I’ve lived with, not the theoretical one I’d create if I could father children with a woman who’d keep me.


Anyway what John Monilon and I did the morning the exterminator was supposed to show was leaf and littered item removal, which meant we needed to walk to the toolshed on the edge of the woods, unlock it with the key on John Monilon’s chain, each take a drab canvas bag with a shoulder strap, each take a bladeless hockey stick handle with a beheaded common nail hammered halfway into one of its ends, then both wander the grounds in search of every leaf and littered item that kept the cemetery from being perfectly green.


Rich, our boss, believed in perfectly green. Perfectly green, Rich said, was essential in cemetery maintenance. If you asked him, people with dead folks need to see as much green as possible when they visit—or even drive past—a cemetery, because green means life in general, and life in general, to such people, can mean a hereafter. These people need belief in a hereafter so they can hope to see their dead folks again, so the greener we could make our cemetery, the more people would pay to keep their folks in it, which meant more money for Rich, which was supposed to mean a raise for me.


But the thing was, on that day (the day the female exterminator was supposed to show at my place), all I’d gotten so far was a fifteen-cent raise—even though I always attacked any leaf or littered item in sight, stabbing it as close to its center as I could, making sure it ended up well inside my bag, jammed toward a corner so it wouldn’t escape into a breeze—and even though John Monilon and I, in the past few months, had been digging and sodding more plots than ever. If we’d earn more money, John Monilon once said, we’d meet more women—even if I was asexual, even, he also said, if we didn’t use our raises to buy sharp clothes. Women, according to John Monilon, can smell money behind a guy no matter what he wears, and money, he said, is the main thing women want. Once I told him he blew more hot air than our newest leaf blower—since no way did he know what every woman wanted—and he told me to try to prove him wrong, then added that, so far, he and I both were living proof he was right. “Maybe they just don’t want a guy with herpes,” was what I said then, and he said, “No one but you knows I have herpes,” which caused me to believe he and I could still be complete friends. But after punch-out that day, he hightailed it from the cemetery faster than ever, which made me wonder if, for me, complete friendship was a piece of pie in the sky.


Anyway John Monilon and I began leaf and littered item removal the morning the exterminator was supposed to finally show, and as usual, we started out side-by-side, with John Monilon telling me about what happened to him the night before, which this time was that he met a woman with large breasts. We walked all the way up and down one hill stabbing leaves as he focused my thoughts on her breasts, telling me how full they were, how she kept pressing the side of one against him because she supposedly couldn’t always hear what he said, how he kept talking more and more softly and shoving quarters in the jukebox to play louder and louder heavy metal songs. He also explained how she must have wanted the breast to keep touching him, because no woman, he said, accidentally lets a breast that size touch a drunk guy that long—and how she must have known the breast was giving him a hard-on, and how, after the hard-on remained hard for at least a continuous hour, she excused herself to go to the bathroom, which he took as an excellent sign, but then, when she left the bathroom, she walked right out of the bar. What got him most, he told me, was that she walked out alone: it was one thing, he said, for a woman in a bar to make you hard and then leave with her friends, but to make you hard and bolt on her own was just plain vicious. Then, like John Monilon often did, he said, “You know what that’s like, right?”—as if I always talked to friendless women who pressed large breasts against me, which he darned well knew I never did. And I said, “No, John, I don’t know what it’s like.” And he said, “Ah, come on, man,” and I said, “I’m telling you, John, I really don’t know,” and then he went off on a long speech, giving me the business about how certain it was that I was asexual. As usual when he did this, I didn’t say anything, just looked ahead for leaves and littered items. Sometimes when he’d do this, I’d want to tell him to shut up, but then I’d tell myself to keep my own mouth shut—because if I asked him to shut his, we’d never be complete friends. It’s better, I’d usually tell myself, to have anyone, even an incomplete friend, walk beside you giving you the business than it is to try to make a cemetery perfectly green by yourself.


And now, also as usual when John Monilon would tell me I was asexual, he tried a bunch of times to get me to admit that I was, but I didn’t give in, and then, after I walked quickly toward a leaf well to our right, I stabbed it and angled off even more toward another leaf without hearing John Monilon or looking back to wait for him. And then there we were, on obviously separate paths, which meant we’d stab everything faster and end up finding each other back at the toolshed sooner, but in the meantime we’d be alone.


And when I’d be alone during leaf and littered item removal, I’d just zigzag without plans from one non-green oasis to the next, and sometimes while I did this I’d think about some of my foster families, often about the last one I stayed with, the one that had me share a bedroom with my foster parents’ natural child, a twelve-year-old boy (about three weeks younger than me) named Thomas. One night Thomas told me that, because his parents were poor, we’d never get an allowance like some of his friends did, and he decided we’d need to make our own money if we wanted to buy things, so we tried all sorts of businesses for kids, including selling tomato seeds door-to-door for this mail-order company in Illinois, selling Christmas cards door-to-door for this mail-order company in Georgia, until we decided that we weren’t getting our fair share of the profits—and that we should start our own mail order company, which I suggested be a stamp company.


At first Thomas didn’t believe a stamp company could make money, but then I told him what I’d learned from a family services lady years earlier—that people collected used stamps and even paid money for them—and soon we were tearing every stamp off his parents’ mail, plus off envelopes we’d see in trash bins at our middle school, and then one night, while we lay awake in our trundle beds, we made lists in our minds of people who got lots of mail and might let us take torn-open envelopes from their wastebaskets. Nuns and priests at churches seemed like a good idea, as did dentists and doctors and insurance men, and the next day, after school, we asked quite a few of these kinds of people if we could look through their trash once a week, and most of them, after they asked why and we explained we were starting our own stamp company, said yes. Two of their secretaries even offered to put aside used envelopes for us so we wouldn’t need to get dirty digging through their garbage cans, and one thing I noticed was that the nicest secretaries always faced Thomas while they were being nice, which, I decided, was because he had shiny yellow-white hair. Of course, in order to sell the stamps, we needed to remove them from their envelopes, which we did by tearing off the upper-right-hand corners of the envelopes, soaking these corners in lukewarm water in soup bowls (cold water took forever to unglue the stamps; hot water caused any colored envelope paper to bleed and stain the stamps permanently), then letting the stamps dry on our linoleum bedroom floor. The library at school had a magazine for stamp collectors, Lynn’s Stamp News, and we put in a classified ad for $2.90 we made shoveling snow, and the ad said, “100 U.S. stamps in very good condition for one dollar postpaid—T & S Stamp,” with our address. T stood for Thomas and S stood for me, and I’d been fine with the T before the S because I made Thomas president of the company one night after he said he was bored with peeling stamps off wet scraps of paper. Maybe six weeks passed with us checking the mailbox for not only cancelled stamps but also letters addressed to our new company, and the day after Thomas asked why we didn’t just mow lawns for cash, the mail came with three one-dollar orders. And soon dollar bills were arriving almost every day, as well as a few checks for a dollar apiece made out to T & S Stamp, which meant we couldn’t cash them until we went to a savings and loan and explained we had a stamp company, walking out that door with an official savings account plus a new source of cancelled stamps. Yeah, we had to keep sending in $2.90 for ads, but we were making an actual profit.


Anyhow Thomas and his parents were the foster family I’d think of most when I’d zigzag away from John Monilon, maybe because T & S Stamp was the closet thing to a group of people I’d really belonged to. Other families I’d stayed with had never kept me feeling as alive. I’m not saying Thomas and his parents made me happy, but their house was at least cleaner than the other places that took me in, which sometimes, when I stabbed littered items in Rich’s cemetery, returned to my mind as a blur of cold fish sticks and the stink of reheated macaroni and cheese. In some of those houses I wasn’t the only foster child, and in those houses, you could actually feel the business of fostering going on, as if you yourself were a cancelled stamp to be soaked and removed and dried in a room and sent away for the profit of the parents, who’d argue about which of them was president. In none of those houses did the parents discuss my future beyond the next week, and in one I slept in the basement, where the pilot light in the boiler sometimes went out, and once in the middle of a night, when that landlord came down to fix the boiler, he asked me to take off my pajama pants, which I was old enough to know not to do. But then he told those foster parents I’d broken the boiler, and a few months later, I was off to a house where my bedroom was half of the attached garage—where a homemade curtain was supposed to keep me from knowing I was sleeping beside a car.


My mind still can’t get rid of the sight of that Fairlane’s muddy passenger-side tires, which I’d seen every night because the curtain wasn’t quite long enough. In fact it very well was a flash of those tires that stopped my thoughts as I bagged a gum wrapper and glanced up to see the woman who always came to the cemetery. She was singing this time, which she’d do now and again, only today she was also visoring her eyes with her hand, looking ahead of her, at the grass. The sun made the grays in her dark blond hair sparkle, and she was wearing baggy blue jeans, and she saw me and smiled and said, “Greetings.”


“Greetings,” I said, and I thought, here we go again, because as much as I wanted to talk to a woman, conversations with this one bothered me, sometimes even scared me.


“Seen any coins?” she said.


“No,” I said. “No coins.”


“I found two today,” she said.


Here it occurred to me to mention my stamps, but then I thought: What’s the point?


So what I said was: “Do you find many here?”


“Coins are everywhere,” she said. “You just have to be looking for them. And where you find one, you tend to find more.”


“But in a cemetery?” I said. “Maybe you should try—”


“You’d be surprised,” she said.


Even right then, without considering that she might have collected coins, I knew she’d be better off in a parking lot. Still, I said, “I guess they could be anywhere.”


“People drop coins,” she said. “It’s just a matter of whether they hear them fall. And then whether they feel like picking them up.”“And you can’t hear a coin hitting grass,” I said, to make her sound more sane.


“And if you could,” she said, “who cares about coins in a cemetery?”


“Uh-huh,” I said.


“In a cemetery,” she said, “people have their minds on other things.”


“Probably so,” I said.


Her eyes floated toward the hill that hid the minor league baseball stadium. “Do you know any?”


“Any what,” I said.


“Dead people.”


“No.”


“So you still see your grandparents—that must be nice.”


“Actually,” I said, “I never knew my grandparents.”


“You were adopted?”


“Sort of.”


“Either you were or you weren’t.”


“I was in foster families.”


“I was adopted,” she said. Her eyes, my glance told me, were on my drab bag. “You didn’t miss much,” she said.


I wanted to tell her what I had missed: how, when you grow up in foster families, you’re basically guaranteed to end up poor, because your foster parents themselves are basically poor, because they tend to be down-on-their-luck couples who take money from the state while trying (unsuccessfully) to raise you on less than the state gives them—not to mention that, after you’ve been fostered and you reach eighteen, you’re all on your own, with no savings for college, no more laws that say you need care, so you end up with the kind of job no one else wants.


But this was the woman who always came to the cemetery, so why tell her this? Plus John Monilon had just crested the hill in front of the minor league baseball stadium on his way toward her and me, and that was one thing I liked about John Monilon: around him, I hardly thought about my childhood. As he walked toward us, we watched him the way two people watch someone else approach to silently admit they no longer want to talk to each other, as if, all of a sudden, they’ve decided to give up on each other, as if, all of a sudden John Monilon, as our current example, was about to say something that could put everyone present on better terms. Of course, three people on better terms after one conversation is less likely than two, which to me then meant it was impossible. But I still couldn’t wait for John Monilon to talk.


Now his eyes were moving back and forth between me and her, and he was shaking his head.


“What is it?” I asked.


“It’s about Rich,” he said.


“What,” I said.


“He was in a car wreck.”


“When.”


“A really bad wreck.”


“How bad?” I asked, even though I knew what he meant.


“He rolled his pick-up,” John Monilon said. “On the way home last night. His wife was just here.”


“What are you saying?” I asked.


“Dude,” he said as if now, finally, we were complete friends. “The guy’s dead.”


And here’s where all three of us—me, the woman, and John Monilon—stood looking at one another like blood siblings might. How long we stood like this is something I couldn’t tell you, but for however long it lasted, I believed each of us could have said anything about ourselves and the other two would have empathized. John Monilon could have said he had herpes; I could have said I saved stamps; the woman could have made her most peculiar statement about coins—and none of us, I was sure, would have minded. It was almost as if Rich had been our father, and then it was kind of as if every blade of grass around us had suddenly turned brown.


Then John Monilon said, “Do you realize what this means?”


The woman eyed him as if he always told the truth—which reminded me of how he always said I was asexual.


“What,” I asked.


“We’ll lose our jobs,” he said.


“Why would that happen?” I asked.


“Because Rich’s wife will inherit the cemetery. And she’ll sell it. And whoever buys it will probably decide to clean house.”


“Why would she sell it?” the woman asked.


“She hates this place,” John Monilon said, mostly to me. “Rich told me that once. She hated how much time he needed to spend here. And now she’ll also hate it because he was driving home from here when he left her for good.”


I saw an elm leaf behind John Monilon, and I walked over and stabbed it.


“What are you doing?” he asked.


“Leaf and littered item removal.”


“Fuck leaf and littered item removal, Steve. Your boss is fucking dead. We might as well burn these bags and go to McDonald’s.”


“For breakfast?” the woman asked.“For jobs,” Rich said. “I mean,” he told her, “for me and him.”


“I find coins in McDonald’s,” the woman said. “A lot of pennies.”


Rich gave her the kind of look strangers must have given her all the time, but she kept watching him like she and I had earlier.


“Why are you here, anyway?” he asked her.


“Because no one heard these coins fall,” she said, and she reached into one of her pockets and took out a dime. “Wait a minute,” she said. “Where’s my nickel?”


She pulled out all four of her pockets, which were empty. Then she studied the grass around her, made fists with her hands, shook both at the same time, then walked off, up the hill in front of the minor league baseball stadium.


“We won’t lose our jobs,” I told John Monilon, who stood perfectly still.


“Sure,” he said. “And you aren’t asexual.”


“John-Mon? Quit saying that to me.”


“I’ll say whatever I want,” he said. “And you can believe whatever you want. That’s your problem, you know. You never really face things.”


“That’s not true,” I said, and I wanted to tell him that all I’d done in my life was face things: one foster family after another, then one day after another of stabbing sod that covered thousands if not millions of bones of dead people. Just because I didn’t complain about what I faced, I wanted to say, didn’t mean I never faced it. And it didn’t help, I wanted to tell him, that all these days we’d worked together, he’d never been a complete friend.


“Like me,” he said. “I face the fact that I have herpes. I face the fact that I have a criminal record. I face the fact that I can’t get laid, and that now I’m going to need a new job—the lack of which won’t help at all when it comes to getting laid.” He cleared his throat, hitched his drab bag higher onto his shoulder. “But at least I try to get laid,” he said. “And...at least I’m a square-shooter with myself.”


“Go to hell, John-Mon,” I said, and right after those words left me, I knew I’d destroyed any last bit of friendship we’d shared. And sure enough, he walked off, away from the hill that hid the minor league baseball stadium, and as he walked he yanked his drab strap off his shoulder, shook out his leaves and littered items, tossed his bag behind him—then, after a short but very fast running start, threw his bladeless hockey stick nail-first at the sun, letting only me watch it complete half a circle and stab itself into a grave. He then walked slowly but straight off the grounds and into the parking lot and got into his Toyota and drove off, and as much as I’d known him, I now had to admit I’d never been attracted to him, or, as far as I could tell, to anyone. Sure, I’d hugged various people in my life, given hello and goodbye kisses to several, and even considered what it would be like to have sex with one or two, but I’d never felt urged toward those actions, certainly not in the way you hear about in song lyrics, or from normal people, like John Monilon, who consider intercourse on par with food as far as human needs go. Over my years I’d liked a few people, but never for longer than maybe thirty seconds at a time, and never so much that penetrating our bodies, or even just exchanging caresses over our skin, seemed like a pleasant idea.


Maybe, I told myself, you are asexual. Maybe it’ll always be like this.


But if it would be, I believed, I could still keep my job. After all, I didn’t have a criminal record. That was the problem with John Monilon: he always thought that whatever he experienced would happen to me, too. It’s different for me, I thought, and I kept on with leaf and littered item removal, figuring I owed it to Rich even though Rich was dead. And who knew: maybe Rich, wherever he was right then, needed to see perfect green in order to believe in a hereafter himself.


So I removed every leaf and littered item remaining on the grounds. Who cared about John Monilon anyway. Who cared about anyone. Then I re-policed the grounds all geared up for any new leaf or littered item, but there weren’t any. The wind had died, like everyone beneath me. In many respects it was a beautiful day. If any excavation would need to be done, I wondered who’d tell me to do it. I returned to the toolshed for a weed-wacker, but the toolshed was locked, and I realized the key for it was probably still on John Monilon’s chain.


Then, to avoid being seen by the day’s visitors—as Rich had always required—I walked up and over the hill in front of the minor league baseball stadium and stood slightly more than my height beyond the top of it. The woman was nowhere. Inside the stadium, an old man was pushing a small aluminum box on wheels that drizzled white chalk to make the third base line. He walked slowly, placing the heel of one foot directly in front of the toes on the other, and I wasn’t attracted to him, but all that really mattered was whether the line would be straight, which, as it turned out, it wasn’t. If I can’t work here, I thought, I can work there. Baseball needs perfectly green grass, I thought, and I felt better.


So I sat right where I’d been standing, just past the top of that hill, waiting for the end of my shift. Rich’s wife, I was sure, would never come back that day, which made me my own boss. I avoided picturing the Fairlane’s muddy tires by remembering T & S Stamp. Thomas and I had invested our profits in cancelled stamps you couldn’t find on envelopes in the mail—far older stamps from a wholesaler who was about to go out of business—and we’d resold them, through the mail, at even greater profits. We’d searched garage sales for all but abandoned stamp collections and bought them at below-catalogue prices and sold individual stamps in them to strangers all over the country, and one in Guam. From the beginning we’d always saved half the profits and reinvested half, so roughly four years into our partnership, we were receiving at least ten dollars a day in the mail. School began to look pointless. Thomas’ parents were proud of us, but they kept T & S Stamp secret from everyone he knew. I wasn’t at all attracted to him or his parents, and I could barely stand the girlfriends he met in our high school—or any girl in any high school—and never, not for one moment, had I felt anything for that landlord who’d asked me to take down my pajama pants. I couldn’t say, as I progressed through high school, that I was attracted to stamps, but I liked them. By my junior year, I’d sit looking at them longer than Thomas would.


The old man was now putting down the first base line. Then he made the two batter’s boxes, which took longer than you’d think. But they were perfect. Still, I wasn’t attracted to him. I didn’t miss the woman who came to the cemetery. I didn’t miss anyone.


Then I walked home. I was surprised to find my door unlocked until I remembered the female exterminator was supposed to have killed the hornets in my medicine chest. Maybe she’s here? I thought as I walked in, even though my apartment is only two rooms and a bathroom and she wasn’t in the main room. She wasn’t in the bathroom, either. The medicine chest was open, and the hornets were nowhere. How she’d killed them was a small mystery to me, as well as what she’d done with them.


I didn’t bother to look for her in the bedroom. If she’d been in there, she would have left my apartment immediately, because she would have seen, on most of the floor and much of my bed, open albums full of inventory that had once belonged to T & S Stamp—that is, before I’d given Thomas our savings account balance of $1,462, which I’d done the week before Christmas our senior year, five days after he said he didn’t want to sell stamps any more, even if he were president. At the time we’d made that deal, I thought we were both being fair, and in a way I sometimes still think we were. He had the money, I’d told myself back then, and I had an odd but growing business that would always stay with me. There would always be plenty of people who cared enough about cancelled stamps to pay ever-increasing prices for them—or so I’d thought back then. And the exterminator’s perfume, I realized now, was everywhere.



Copryright 2007 by Mark Wisniewski.

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Writer's pictureRobert Giron

Updated: Nov 30, 2021

Harvest Cycle

by Marie Holmes


Cassie found her announcement one day on the medical students’ board. It was the first flier of hundreds she had read during lunch breaks that could possibly be directed at her. The paper was pale pink, free of distasteful clip-art, the bold text arranged in a simple, double-lined box: Loving Couple Seeks Openhearted, Caucasian Woman, 21-34. That was all. There were two numbers in small type lower down on the page. One was obviously a telephone number—a hospital extension—and the other, while not preceded by a dollar sign and not containing a comma, was, Cassie felt certain, a monetary amount. That figure was five thousand. She removed the pushpin and folded the sheet of paper in half and then again so that it fit inside her palm.

Cassie worked in medical records at the hospital, pushing carts of paper between high metal shelves, hopping up a stepladder to retrieve manila folders neatly labeled with colored stickers. It was not where she had intended to end up, with her bachelor’s in sociology. What exactly her intentions were remained a mystery to Cassie, and she dedicated great swaths of time to imagining the endless iterations of shape that could be created with her life.

Cassie pulled files, replaced files, silently singing the alphabet all day long. What made her job bearable was the loose paper, transcriptions of dictations telephoned in by doctors and e-mailed to her computer from someplace in India. These she hole-punched and inserted into individual charts. She read every page that she touched, and racked up volumes of anecdotal medical knowledge—fearing aneurysm every time her head ached, stomach cancer when her gut cramped. She became a repository of fascinating hospital gossip—a baby wounded during a caesarian section, an old man who had died of a heart attack while waiting in the emergency room—which nobody would ever ask her about. None of the other clerks read the files. Not like she did. Cassie had asked: her colleagues found the material in the charts indecipherable and dull. But these stories—plain, tragic, typical—were entirely responsible, Cassie believed, for keeping her from losing herself to her own mind in those gray, fireproof basement rooms.

“Gynecology,” answered a receptionist when Cassie dialed the extension from her cubicle that afternoon. She scanned the sheet of paper for a name, some other identifying word.

“There was a flier?” she ventured, “posted by the mailroom?”

“You’re calling about the donor ad?”

“Yes,” said Cassie, disappointed to think that she was not the first.

The woman transferred her call. A male doctor, a reproductive endocrinologist, as he introduced himself, said he was just going to ask her a few questions: date of birth, height, weight, skin color—he wanted a very specific description here. Cassie said she tanned easily, and he said, "Why don’t we say olive." He needed to know how far she had gone in school, her SAT scores, and whether anybody in her family carried a genetic disease—cystic fibrosis, Tay Sach’s, Fanconi’s anemia, phenylketonuria. Cassie was fascinated—what were those last two? But it wasn’t an appropriate moment to ask.


 

College graduation had come like a sudden, sheeting downpour that left her scurrying for shelter. Cassie had done well in school. But between the chalked protest messages and the poetry and the decadent discovery of her sexuality, there had been little time to contemplate her post-college existence.

The town she lived in wasn’t far from where she had gone to school. School, however, had been far away from the rest of the world: an overpriced oasis of the liberal arts in the middle of the desert. The job at the hospital had been listed with career services, and although the position was clearly in medical records, the language of description— oversee, liaison, confidential—had intrigued her. Her ex-girlfriend, Gwen, was going to be teaching on the nearby reservation, as part of a national service program, and she was looking for another housemate. Their unkempt two-story with the overgrown lawn was a kind of halfway house, a last pit stop before passing into the limits of adulthood. Teachers’ salaries were, inexplicably, generous, and Cassie’s roommates provided take-out burritos and beer and stories of maladjusted children and monstrous parents and tyrannical administrators that filled long, warm evenings on their peeling porch.

Cassie still cared for Gwen. Their relationship had been brief, but exhaustive, in its way. Gwen was androgynously beautiful. Tall and athletically slender, with the hint of some delicateness about her. Gwen and Cassie had gone together to a summer program in Italy, and when the course in Rome was finished they changed their tickets, squeezed every last cent from their credit cards and caught the ferry at Bari. For two weeks, they caught early morning boats between the least-visited of the Greek islands, where the black sand was so hot that you had to lay on thick straw mats in order to be near the water. They breakfasted on fruit and honey and thick yogurt and their skin crusted with salt from swimming topless in the sea. When the relationship ended—not long after their return to school—they met in Gwen’s dorm room to divide the photographs. The only picture that Cassie had really felt she needed was a shot she had taken of Gwen knee-deep in the ocean, walking towards her, her hair and skin glistening in the late afternoon sun. Something about the way Gwen’s body held itself up—as though still buoyed by the salty water—struck Cassie with a sense of openness, as though the memory of that moment could expand to fill landscapes past the edge of the picture.

Since becoming housemates, there had been glimpses of the intimacy that they had once shared, and this pleased Cassie. Gwen struggled with the young students foisted upon her in September, and found in Cassie an attentive audience. Their conversations provided Cassie with a focus beyond her own unsettling aimlessness and the incessant difficulties of maintaining her bank account. Cassie’s parents did send money, every so often. They were earnest, aged-hippie types who assured her that, with time, she would mark her own path.


 

On the day of the interview, Cassie wore a freshly washed shirt and sensible shoes. It seemed important to project an image of cleanliness. The doctor who she had spoken with on the phone met her, alone, in his office. There was no official egg donation program at the hospital, he explained, but they had the facilities—meaning the doctor himself, Cassie guessed—to perform in-vitro fertilization with a donor egg. If they could find a suitable donor, it would save this couple from having to travel out to one of the big city clinics for as many cycles as it took them to conceive.

He had pages of questions. Somebody brought Cassie a cup of coffee. First they went through her medical history—sexual, social, psychological. The doctor had big, prickly-looking white eyebrows, which he cocked cartoonishly. He could not suppress his pleasure at Cassie’s lesbianism.

“So you’ve never had intercourse with a man?” He pushed his face forward from the neck, leaning out from his cushioned chair.

Cassie shook her head, wishing that she had dressed a little less conservatively. She was a dyke, not a nun, after all.

“But I have—you know—in high-school—”

“You’ve performed fellatio.”

Cassie nodded.

“Did you develop any sores in your mouth?”

“No.”

Cassie was neither especially ashamed nor humored to say such things. She knew that the doctor had seen stories much stranger than hers. She wished, in fact, that her own history were a little more colorful, contained something for them both to ponder in that drab office.

As the interview progressed, the questions grew stranger. Cassie forced herself to pause thoughtfully before each answer. The doctor asked which hand she used to write with, whether she could sing on key, how she rated her athletic abilities. Did she consider herself especially agile, average, or clumsy?

Average, Cassie said. She thought of herself standing on one foot during a yoga class that she had taken at school to fulfill a physical education requirement and pulled her spine straight against the back of her chair.

She became slightly frantic, towards the end, certain that her answers could not have captured all that was genetically desirable about her. The doctor cooperated, duly noting everything that she rattled on about. There would only be one chance. It wasn’t a job interview, but rather a cross between a medical visit and some other type of evaluation— she felt the shadow of something beneath each inert question. Cassie was being checked out, by the doctor, on behalf of the infertile couple. The process of selection had been clinicalized, and she was sure that their rejection would come over the telephone like an unhappy test result. She was no med student, no athlete, no artistic genius. These people, Cassie thought, would not pick her, and she would return to her stacks of files, to a bedroom window overlooking a tangle of weeds, without any proof that she had done this, that she had raised to the top of a stack.

The last thing the doctor did was take her picture. It was a Polaroid—the hospital was for some reason full of Polaroids, as Cassie had learned from notices for missing cameras that appeared above the photocopy machine in the basement. The doctor didn’t offer to let her watch her picture develop, but as he was showing her to the door, he looked down at the white square in his hand and smiled slightly. After saying goodbye and thank you Cassie paused a moment in hopes that he would say something more, something silly and inappropriate, perhaps tell her she was the cutest one so far. But instead he wished her a pleasant day.

That night, Cassie asked Gwen if she was attractive. Cute was what she said. “Do you think I’m cute?”

Gwen was smoking a cigarette, flicking ash into the garbage can as Cassie washed her plate in the sink. “I still find you attractive,” Gwen said coolly. She looked to Cassie’s face and then held her gaze there. Cassie felt something gooey and warm spreading in her stomach.


 

Two weeks went by. Cassie told herself that she was resigned to rejection, but there was a fluttering in her chest whenever the telephone in her cubicle sounded. She had told no one of her interview, and this allowed her to hope that she had made a good impression on the doctor. When he called to tell her that the infertile couple was indeed interested in harvesting her oocytes, pride rose up and bathed her like a cooling salve.

First, she was to meet with a young psychologist who had been recruited, it appeared, to deem her fit to withstand the cycle and harvest. She went over the process with Cassie, who assured her that she had no ethical qualms about leftover embryos being frozen or discarded. Cassie had done some reading on the Internet, and she worked as much medical terminology as possible into her answers, calling her eggs oocytes and mentioning various hormones by name.

After a time, the psychologist put down her pen and closed the folder in which she had been taking notes. Cassie scooted into the front part of her chair, preparing to stand, but then the psychologist sighed, just loudly enough for Cassie to hear.

“I’m just curious, why do you want to do this?”

Cassie had hoped against this particular question, as she could concoct no response that would be both rational and seemly. The obvious incentive was money, and the obvious thing to say was that she wanted to help these people. No words and no reasons, however, explained the way she felt at that moment, clutching her bag to her chest. A strange heat fingered its way towards her face and neck.

“Because I can,” she said, willing her tongue to move in a manner that wouldn’t betray her. “I’m healthy, I have time, I don’t think I have the kinds of problems with all this that some women would.”

“And the payment?” The psychologist had tossed her rapport-building mantle. She was asking this one for herself.

“It’s nice. But I guess there are easier ways to get money. What I’d like is to make a down payment on a car.”

“You don’t have a car?” The psychologist seemed genuinely surprised.

Cassie shook her head slowly.

“That sounds perfectly reasonable. I’m sorry. I was just wondering—”

“It’s okay,” Cassie interrupted. “It’s all kind of fascinating—I mean, I think it is.”

“Are you a med student?” The psychologist squinted at her.

Cassie gave her best polite laugh.

She was quick to shut the door behind her. Medical school, she thought. Just one of a thousand options she had never contemplated. Yet there was a promise of forward motion. She would not be at this tedious job forever. She had written, she had read, she had traversed far-away waters. And there too was that round weight sinking, with its incessant threat of anchoring here. Cassie found it difficult sometimes to tell whether she was moving along or she was falling. She had a secret wish, nestled like a small, burrowing animal inside her chest, to be a part of something larger, to scratch somewhere and know it would be permanent.


 

She had passed muster with the psychologist, the doctor called to inform her. Cassie’s next task was to meet with the lawyer. He met her in the doctor’s office with some papers he had drawn up for her to sign, relinquishing her rights to the embryos created with her eggs and any children that resulted.

“They don’t want to meet me?” Cassie enquired. “Before?”

“It’s standard procedure,” said the doctor, who sat behind his desk and tapped on his keyboard while the lawyer unearthed documents from an overstuffed briefcase.

“Even if the harvest is successful, a pregnancy doesn’t always result—it’s best if there isn’t any contact between the donor and the recipient.”

Cassie didn’t entirely believe him—surely, some of the people who placed these ads selected their donors themselves.

“Don’t I get to know anything about them?” It seemed fair. They knew her entire medical history, had seen the Polaroid picture that she herself had not gotten a look at.

The doctor looked down at his desk, away from Cassie’s gaze. “These people want very badly to be parents. They’re grateful for your help,” he said. The lawyer handed her a pen.


 

Teresa Ankeley was thirty-four years old and her folder was as fat as the ones they sent stacked in carts to the transplant center or psychiatry. After days of carefully negotiated sifting in the files that were called up to the infertility clinic, Cassie had identified Teresa Ankeley and memorized her location: third shelf from the bottom, a few palm’s lengths from the back of the row. Every time she went into that gray, cinderblock storage room to pull or replace a cartload of charts, she would slip Mrs. Ankeley’s tome on the top of her stack, reading as she looped the shelves. One page per file handled. She longed to take Mrs. Ankeley’s story home with her, or to at least slip it away for her lunch hour so as to devour its pages in the privacy of a dark booth in the cafeteria. Cassie had lost the urge to eye other charts with anything more than a passing interest, and the thought of getting caught with her head in this one was too terrible to imagine. Nobody could know, not before she had fingered every page, every lab form, every physician’s scrawl.

Eight years earlier, Mrs. Ankeley, then Teresa Martin, came to the hospital for a colonoscopy. She was referred by a doctor at a private clinic across town. Patient complains of excessive fatigue, those records read. Anemia? The doctor had ordered blood tests and instructed Teresa Martin to provide a stool sample. Cassie envisioned Teresa Martin—just a few years older than Cassie—outside a stucco clinic building, sitting behind the wheel of her car, tired and sad and scared, staring at the plastic cup that she was to return with the next morning.

The doctor’s office had sent the hospital a photocopy of some lab results. Certain numbers were highlighted orange. The notes section from Teresa Martin’s visit to the GI clinic read, simply, Chief complaint blood in stool. Cassie examined the pictures taken inside her lower intestine—grainy images that she could not imagine were of any diagnostic use. Several growths were removed during the procedure. There was writing that Cassie could not decipher, and words she did not comprehend. She recognized, however, the term malignancy, which appeared several times. Cassie thought of a doctor in one of the clinics holding the pictures up to the light, circling things with his finger. He would have made the call himself. He would have told Teresa Martin that she needed to come in to discuss her test results.


 

After her period had come and gone, Cassie made the appointment upstairs.

In the exam room, there was a small bowl of smooth, colored agates, and photographs on the wall of newborn infants cradled in enormous flower petals. A lavender gown, which tied across the chest instead of in back, lay neatly folded on the padded exam table. Cassie imagined that this was what a beauty spa would feel like—it was impossible to think that she was still in the hospital. The slim women sitting in the waiting area, with their leather purses and their handle bags from upscale mall stores, were not the hospital’s usual clientele. According to the papers she had signed, it was the infertile couple who would be cutting Cassie’s check once her eggs were harvested, it was to their home that the bills for her office visits were to be sent. No insurance would cover any of this.

The doctor did an ultrasound to examine Cassie’s ovaries. He slicked up some kind of probe with a gel, inserted it, and pressed against her cervix. Her ovaries sat like round sacks on the screen, gray and giant. After, a nurse came and gave her an injection of Lupron. The initial puncture of the needle stung a bit. Cassie exhaled, as the nurse directed, and the pain faded, but as she pushed the fluid into Cassie’s thigh, her muscle began to ache and then pulled into a piercing cramp. By the time the nurse withdrew the needle, Cassie’s eyes were brimming, and when she wiped at them with her fingers she only spread the water across her skin.

“That’s a tough one.” The nurse handed her a tissue.

“I didn’t think it was going to hurt,” Cassie said. “Are they all like that?”

Cassie’s skin was bumpy with cold underneath the thin gown, the tissue damp and wadded in one hand. She felt suddenly small and stupid.

“It’ll all be over before you know it.” The nurse placed the palm of her hand on Cassie’s exposed knee and shook it gently.


 

The records from the oncology department begin two weeks after Teresa Martin’s colonoscopy. Patient eager to schedule surgery as soon as possible.

The brief “social history” section of the preformatted clinic notes pages provided little descriptive information for Cassie to add to the image of Teresa Martin. As Cassie would have guessed, Teresa Martin was a non-smoker who had never injected herself with drugs. She was heterosexual and single. She worked at a gym—a trainer, perhaps? or a masseuse?—and lived alone. It was this last detail that struck Cassie as she read standing between the shelves, pretending to work. She imagined Teresa Martin’s clean, quiet apartment—large, unused candles on square side tables and a refrigerator moderately stocked with vegetables and fruit. Who would stay with her while she was sick? Was there a sister?

A portion—it was impossible to ascertain how much, without an anatomy textbook, as the Latinate terms meant little to Cassie—of Teresa Martin’s colon had been removed during the operation. Then another phone call. Another office visit. More difficult news. The cancer had not penetrated the colon and spread to other parts of her body, and the surgery was to have been the only treatment. But there had been some complication, some unforeseen quality to the tumors.

Discussed removal of growths and possibility of cancer remaining. Patient requests that chemotherapy begin immediately. Concerned about nausea and hair loss. Says not worried about possible effects on fertility.

Teresa Martin’s thoughts about having children made an intuitive sense to Cassie. There was a demarcation, she saw, a line that circumstance could deepen into a chasm, between an obsession with the shape of a future and an obsessive focus on the having of one.


 

On the day that she brought home a paper sack of vials and syringes and dumped its contents onto her bed, Cassie decided to tell Gwen. To keep it secret seemed unnecessarily martyr-like. She thought she would say it that evening on the back porch, where she could watch the horizon as she spoke. She would pop the top off a bottle of beer, raise it to her lips, say, So I’m going to do this thing, and take a long, cool sip. But it had rained earlier so the porch furniture was still wet, there was no beer and it was just Cassie and Gwen making sandwiches in the kitchen.

“Guess what I’m doing,” Cassie said.

Gwen didn’t glance up from the tomato she was slicing. “Tell me,” she said. And Cassie wondered if she should. Gwen’s voice had a hard quality to it—she was tired, Cassie thought. Her students leeched something from her.

Cassie attempted to change the subject, asking Gwen about her day at school.

“Just say what you’re going to say.” Gwen tossed the remaining tomato wedge into its wet plastic bag.

Cassie described, as succinctly as possible, how her oocytes were going to be cultivated and monitored and finally harvested.

Gwen grabbed a head of lettuce from the refrigerator and began ripping off the outermost, limpid leaves. “You”—she watched intently as the look in Gwen’s eyes traveled and transformed into the words on her lips—“are fucking weird.”

Cassie eyed the kitchen door. Imagined the sound it would make slamming behind her. She told Gwen it was five thousand dollars.

“That’s more than a down payment on a car,” she added.

“But why?” Gwen’s arms hung flaccidly at her sides, the lettuce dangling from her fingers.

“I need the money,” Cassie said weakly. “I just need to do this.”


 

Teresa Martin’s chemotherapy was unique—new, possibly experimental. It required her to be treated in a series of three cycles. Self-conscious about thinning of hair read one note. Hair loss only noticeable to patient.

At another visit, Theresa complained to a nurse that her labia had grown so dry that they cracked and bled against the brush of toilet paper. Personal lubricant recommended.

A couple of pages later, there was a reference to a baseball cap, beneath a notation that nutritional drinks had been suggested. Cassie flipped back the pages to the first visits, and calculated that by this point Theresa Martin had lost nearly twenty pounds. Cassie imagined her striking, bony face, under the brim of a red cap, whittled to a gangly, teenage shape.


***


The first weeks’ worth of injections were relatively simple, the syringes small. But then the doctor gave her a new hormone, which was to be injected deep into the muscle covering her hip. Gwen did not hesitate when Cassie asked for help.

The first couple of mornings, Cassie thought for sure that she would scream before the needle was out. But Gwen quickly grew deft with her angling. Cassie found a prickly sort of comfort in their new, clinical routine. Gwen would enter Cassie’s room before seven, expertly pulling the fluid from the vial. She pressed the syringe until a tiny spray shot from the tip of the needle, wiped Cassie’s skin with an alcohol swab, pinched a width of her flesh then jabbed the needle straight in. Slowly she pressed the fluid into Cassie’s muscle and then a fast exit, with her fingers wiggling the skin as though to shake off the pain. There was no earthly reason for a band-aid; nevertheless, Gwen stuck a tiny, beige adhesive strip to the injection site, tapping it into place with the tips of her fingers. What amazed Cassie was that she kept trying so hard to be gentle, after each of her efforts had plumed up into purplish-brown bruises.

For the entire six-week cycle, Cassie took great care when lowering her hips into bus seats and chairs. She was bloated and her breasts swelled slightly, but otherwise didn’t feel that the hormones were affecting her. There was one evening when she opened the refrigerator and found the ice cream gone and before she could stop herself her eyes had filled with stupid tears. She was especially tired at night.

Mornings were the best times. Cassie would arrive early at the hospital and make her way to the clinic, where the nurse waved her into the usual exam room. Then the doctor arrived. He left other women waiting for her, Cassie was sure. Hers was a precious load. She would pull off her pants, lay back on the table, and within moments there would be the soft knocking at the door. Then the doctor would perform a quick ultrasound, tell her everything looked good, that at three weeks they’d be ready for harvest.

She came in on Saturdays as well, and by the time she arrived, the doctor would have turned on the lights, opened the window in the stuffy exam room, and set the bottle of ultrasound gel to warm in a sink full of hot water. It was a longer trip for Cassie, with the buses running on their truncated weekend schedule. The doctor was thoughtful. On Saturdays he brought her coffee with milk and sugar—from the store, not the cafeteria.


 

During her third round of chemotherapy, Teresa Martin made six visits to the emergency room. Unable to keep down water. Dehydration. The doctors gave her Compazine, IV fluids, and discharged her the same day.

Once, she arrived with chief complaints fever and shortness of breath, and was eventually admitted to the hospital with pneumonia. Her treatment was suspended for a time, so that the third cycle grew into what was practically a fourth.

By the time the chemotherapy was over, and test results pronounced her remission, more than a year had passed since her initial diagnosis. There were few pages left in her file. Some colonoscopy pictures, just as indecipherable as the first. And ink-jet printouts of laboratory results. Finally, the records from the infertility clinic began. They were the first to mark the name change. Between her remission and the search for an oocyte donor, Teresa Martin had become Mrs. Ankeley.

These latest records lacked the oncologist’s sense of detail, of language. The current doctor—Cassie’s doctor— left no sense of Teresa Ankeley’s transformation from a woman unsure she would want a child to a woman who needed a child so much that she went looking for Cassie. There was nothing about the marriage, the return of her health, all the years that had passed. No clue as to when she had changed her mind. Cassie wondered if the idea of the baby had come when there was no need for birth control. If the fact of the impossibility, the blank permanency of no children, had charged Mrs. Ankeley’s desires.

Cassie replaced the file in its spot, sorry to have finished it so quickly, with days to go before the harvest and nothing more to discover. She tried reading the files that passed across her metal cart, but there was no comparison to the story of Teresa Martin’s cancer and remission, and Cassie returned to the shelf each day to re-read a few pages. Her appreciation grew upon second and third readings. No other chart was so brimming with information, so complete.

The oncologist was, it seemed, a man after Cassie’s own heart, a literary type prone to full sentences and evocative descriptions in place of doctor shorthand. He had once written that Teresa Martin was crestfallen upon hearing test results. It would go on like this for pages, and Cassie came to see that something other than writerly instinct, something beyond clinical concern, moved the doctor’s hand. Even before Cassie finally deciphered the signature at the bottom of a lined page, she knew that what she had been reading was some kind of romance. Dr. Ankeley had stopped by Teresa’s bedside every day that she was hospitalized, not for the perfunctory task of examining her but to ask how she felt, to discuss the long course of her treatment. He wrote about the sound of her breath. He noted that she seemed revived, animated. Teresa Martin was bone-thin, balding, and seriously ill, and Dr. Ankeley wrote of her not in idealizations—she was clammy and depressed and coughing productively—but with a singularity of observation that could only be art, or love.


 

Dr. Ankeley’s first name was Clarence. Cassie looked him up in the staff directory on-line. His offices were on the fourth floor. Department of Oncology. The clinic hours were posted.

The next Tuesday, after her morning ultrasound, she looped the hospital corridors, passing through sets of swinging, windowed doors, until she finally spotted a sign for Oncology. As in most of the clinics, the waiting area spilled out into the hallway, where some chairs and tables and old magazines had been set. There was an elderly man with an oxygen tank, an old lady in a wheelchair, a teenager playing a handheld videogame. He was tan and full-bodied, and it took Cassie a moment to notice that, in addition to being bald, he had no eyebrows or lashes. There were a couple of women wearing head-coverings—a floppy red fishing hat and a scarf with purple flowers.

Cassie approached the reception desk and took hold of a clipboard, as though she had done this before. It was a sign-in sheet: name, physician, appointment time. There were two doctors listed, Ankeley and Miller.

“Need a pen?” offered the woman behind the desk. She eyed Cassie curiously.

“No,” Cassie mumbled, reading the sheet before her. “Here’s one.”

She picked up the blue ballpoint tucked into the top of the clipboard, and with the slow, deliberate motions of a first-grader, traced the neat cursive of Esperanza Sanchez, the last patient to have signed-in to see Dr. Ankeley. Then she sat, unsure for what it was she waited. For Dr. Ankeley to introduce himself? To emerge, name neatly stitched to his white coat, calling Esperanza’s name?

The next patient was summoned by a nurse. Fifteen minutes passed, then twenty, and Cassie thought that she might have to wait until Dr. Ankeley left for lunch to get a look at him. But then she heard a man’s voice inquiring, “Sanchez?” The woman with the purple-flowered headscarf stood and stepped away from her seat. Cassie stared into her lap, breathing hard, and then she looked up.

To say that he was not who she had been expecting wouldn’t be accurate. Cassie did not so much have a vision of Dr. Ankeley as an idea. For weeks she had imagined how it felt to look at Theresa Martin from his privileged, clinical vantage—and Mrs. Ankeley she could see. She had a height, a (recovered) weight. Cassie had selected for her a hair color (light brown) and eye color (blue). She had a birthday. Dr. Ankeley, until that moment, had functioned simply as her eyes and hands, observing and recounting his wife’s story. To look up and see anything other than a mirror image of herself was its own kind of shock.

He wasn’t wearing a white coat but a shirt and tie, with a stethoscope coiled around the back of his neck. He was of average height, and his belly hung softly over his belt, wrapped snugly in the fabric of the salmon-colored dress shirt. Wiry tufts of white hair seemed to have been stuck haphazardly around his crown, behind his ears. The skin of his face hung in creased folds, as if weather-beaten. Sixty, Cassie thought. He looked to be at least in his sixties. She stared, and he caught her gaze, staring right back at her for a long moment, longer than he should have been comfortable looking, as though it were a kind of pleasure, an entitlement. Cassie felt her blood swishing frantically in her veins, pumping up something inside her that would soon burst.

Dr. Ankeley motioned for Mrs. Sanchez to go on ahead back towards his office, the exam room, whatever it was they had hiding back there. When she stepped in front of him, he drew a hand to her back and ran it delicately down her spine, tapping his fingers against her tailbone. Cassie heard a strange sound, like a sneeze and a gagging. There were breaths coming fast, and she realized that they were her own.

She stood, steadied herself, and walked with long, swinging strides towards the set of double doors that led to the elevator. When she turned to glance back, Dr. Ankeley and Esperanza Sanchez were gone. The other patients had returned to their magazines. Forgotten the girl in the waiting room, her strange sound absorbed in the peripheral din of bodily malfunction and bizarre behavior.


 

The next morning, Cassie bit her lip and held her breath during the injection. When Gwen left, she lay a while on her mattress, lingering with her image of Dr. Ankeley and a trembling uneasiness in her gut. She felt as though she had been the one to cast him as the father, and now, finding him unfit for the role, she had only herself to blame.

She could back out at any time, Cassie reminded herself. The lawyer’s papers allowed for it. And she knew that she wouldn’t. It was for Mrs. Ankeley that she was going through with the harvest. She needed her.


 

Gwen surprised Cassie by taking a day off so that she could accompany her to the final appointment. She was supposed to have someone escort her home, lest she fall down the stairs or walk out into traffic in her anesthetized haze. In the softly lit waiting area, Gwen looked sleek and androgynous—perfectly out of place—and Cassie was sorry that she had come all this way.

It was a different room, on the day of the procedure—there were more tubes strung about, more bottles, brighter lights. Cassie changed into the requisite lavender gown. The doctor came in, accompanied by another young doctor, who would be administering the anesthesia.

“This is it,” the doctor said, with some measure of pride. Everybody—the two doctors and the nurse—had been reduced to heads hovering above her, and she felt suddenly exposed.

Cassie tried not to think about the forest of floating follicles blooming with round oocytes that she had watched growing on the ultrasound pictures, which was about to be snipped, or deracinated—she didn’t attempt to recall the details of the procedure, not while supine on the table. It would hurt, when she woke, in some way that she had never felt before. The nurse told her she might be sore for a day or so, and that she might be nauseated and dizzy from the anesthesia. Cassie felt her fingers begin to shake, and she looked up at the nurse, who was already reaching down for her hand.

“Whiskey,” said the anesthesiologist. His voice sounded like he was trying to take a picture of a kid.

“Here comes the whiskey.” There was a pinching at her arm, and his smooth pate was floating over her, his words soft and dulcet like thick liquor over ice.

“What do you like to drink?”

And Cassie remembered thinking: beer, but before she could push the sound from her lips her mind slipped into blankness.


 

It didn’t hurt, when she woke up. She was in the same room, her legs removed from the stirrups and tucked under a blanket. Sunlight shone in directly through the windows, reflecting off the glistening floor. Cassie struggled to form a thought through the haze enveloping her brain, and all she could come up with was, Time has passed. Her mouth tasted filmy and strange, and she remembered that she had not had anything to eat or drink since the night before. She felt the same down there, she didn’t even feel numb.

At one point, the nurse came in and asked if she would like help getting up, or if she wanted to sleep some more, and Cassie said, Sleep.

The light coming in through the windows became so bright that she couldn’t keep her eyes open, and the taste in her mouth grew more bothersome. A trail of bubbles passed ferociously through her stomach. She didn’t trust her legs to hold her up, and she hung onto the edge of the table as she stood.

When the nurse returned, Cassie was standing at the window. There was a white-haired lady bent over her walker inching towards the entrance below, making her slow, slow way to an appointment.

“You’re up,” the nurse said, with a note of congratulation. “How are you feeling?”

Cassie turned to face her, to tell her that she was fine, she was ready to leave. She looked to the stirrups, the steel sink by the wall, the glass jar of cotton gauze, the nurse’s face. She pulled the thin gown tight across her chest, and as she exhaled the tears came tumbling thickly down her cheeks.

“It’s over.” Her voice scraped against her throat.

“It’s all over now.”

The nurse was accommodating. She helped Cassie back into her clothes, handed her tissues, caught her shoulder when she stooped low into a sob. By the time she was dressed, she had regained enough of her composure. The borders of her world—the invisible measurements that held together a moment—had reconstructed themselves into something recognizable.

Gwen sat anxiously, waiting in the same chair Cassie had left her in. Not so much time had passed as she had thought. Cassie said that she didn’t feel sick. She said she wanted to get home and get something to eat. Gwen slipped her arm through Cassie’s elbow, fastening her there, as though she might shatter were she to fall.


 

Cassie followed Mrs. Ankeley’s medical record carefully, waiting for new documentation, for the implantation, for the pregnancy, to appear. But it often took days for charts to make their way from one department to another, or for copies of clinic papers to be sent down to the basement—sometimes these would arrive a month after an appointment—and there were as of yet no new additions to Mrs. Ankeley’s file. The doctor, however, was unexpectedly generous with information during Cassie’s follow-up visits: Seventeen eggs had been harvested and subsequently fertilized, he explained. After five days, there were left six robust-looking embryos, two of which were transferred into Mrs. Ankeley’s womb, and the remaining four cryogenically frozen.

When the lab results proving the fact of her pregnancy finally appeared in her chart, Cassie made herself a photocopy, which she folded into quarters and tucked in her back pocket. For weeks after, there was no more news. Nobody even called up her file. Cassie wondered if she had miscarried early, never bothering to return to the hospital.

She imagined fiercely and she believed that Mrs. Ankeley was still pregnant, that one of the fetuses had sloughed away and left the strongest to grow—a girl. She would survive this, too, and one day she would take her child and drive away. She would leave town and head off in some direction. Cassie knew she would keep going.



Copyright © 2006 by Marie Holmes.

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Writer's pictureRobert Giron

On the Verge

by Tim Mullaney


“Do they really drink blood?”


Ethan’s lip curls as he asks the question, as if to indicate he already knows–is already mocking–the answer. But his irony is mitigated by his directness, and Toady struggles, as he has all summer, to formulate a reply.


“Piet took a bite out of a raccoon that got run over in the parking lot. Supposedly.”


Toady has settled on the safest way of answering Ethan: with specific information tempered with a tone of casual skepticism. It is a technique he has refined since the day he graduated from Jackson High, which was the same day Ethan got back to town and asked if Carousel Kitchen had changed its menu since his last time home, during winter break. Toady had said no, the menu was still the same; he had been a little puzzled by the question and a little hurt when, after he answered, Ethan had laughed and said, “Never mind.” The memory of this laugh, a condescending note rising and falling in Ethan’s throat, still hovers close to Toady’s skin, threatening as a yellow jacket. To avoid being stung he assiduously avoids answering “yes” or “no” to Ethan’s, or anyone’s, questions.


“Bullshit.”


Ethan spits this out straight, and Toady is reassured by such definitiveness. For an instant, he has the feeling that the ship he is on has crested a dangerous swell and is sliding easily back into the calm pocket of the trough. But then Ethan exhales cigarette smoke through his nose and squints in a peculiar way, as though he’s found something covertly sought-after. Toady narrows his eyes in the same direction as Ethan’s, but can’t focus through his feeling that something is off kilter and won’t right itself. There’s a rustle where there used to be a sigh, and his ship is again climbing the wave.


The night is warm, with an inviting heaviness in the air, but Toady wishes it was cold. He wants to sit in Ethan’s rusted hatchback, the way they used to on winter nights, wants to listen to the radio until the car’s battery dies and the music cuts out and they are left to fill the silence with their talk. Then they would be alone, the windows steamed with their breath, the crowd in the parking lot rendered invisible. He doesn’t like the way Ethan’s attention wanders as he smokes, slouched against the hood of his car, scoping out their old schoolmates loitering in the parking lot and under the restaurant awning. These are the people he and Ethan discussed on those nights when the car’s power failed, leaving them separate and superior in a cocoon of ripped leather upholstery. Ethan has been uninterested in private gossip sessions since the beginning of summer, when he perfunctorily asked Toady how everyone was doing, what they were up to. Toady, thrown off by Ethan’s apparent disinterest, aimed for nonchalance but felt petulant and defensive when he said he wasn’t really sure, didn’t really care what was going on with people. Ethan shrugged off that response and stopped pumping Toady for information, but during the first few nights of June, the first few nights everyone gathered at Carousel Kitchen, Toady reluctantly trailed Ethan as he made his way from one table to the next, then through the throng in the parking lot, asking everyone how they spent their last year and how they planned to spend their summer and the next year. Now Ethan has stopped this kind of mingling, but the old order is still disturbed, and it is increasingly difficult for Toady to master his desire to take Ethan’s face in his hands and sift his expression for clues as to what excites his curiosity and why. He wishes they had talked more often during the last year.


Tonight, as on many recent nights, Toady’s palms sweat with the exertion of secretly reading Ethan’s inscrutable expression, tracking his attention as it is directed here and there. He follows Ethan’s gaze across the street. The parking lot at Lou’s Diner is swarming with the usual crowd dressed in shades of black and purple, shot through with electric stripes of green or pink or blue. Many faces are accented by heavy makeup that glows in the neon light of the Lou’s Home Cookin sign. Lately a rumor has circulated through Carousel Kitchen that these freaks on the opposite side of the street have stopped ordering food at Lou’s and instead drink coffee and smoke cigarettes and then peal out to go in search of their real meals: squirrels and raccoons and opossums. Rumor has it they thrive on fresh blood, that they are, or least have deluded themselves into thinking they are, vampires.


“I should go,” Toady says, hoping Ethan will look at him when he replies.


“. . . Okay.” Ethan looks at the ground in front of Toady’s feet and then away again, quickly, back across the street.


“I mean, I’m not really tired. But I’ve gotta be on the line at seven.”


“. . . ’s a shitty job.” Ethan closes his eyes as he says this, as though in pain, and then squints at Toady like someone who’s stared at the sun too long.


“. . . Yeah . . . well . . . waited too long to try to get a job, I guess this is what I get.”


“Should quit.”


“I need the money.”


“Yeah. I guess.”


Men work on the loading docks or the mechanized lines, the lines with big machines that dye pistachios red and wrap gift baskets in three layers of plastic. Women and students assemble the baskets on the stationary lines. Standing behind long tables, they pass the baskets down from one hand to the next, each person adding another item: a sausage, a block of cheese, a small bag of just-dyed pistachios, a tin of dog biscuits.


Dell is the only man over the age of eighteen who works on the stationary lines. His hands are just as callused as those of the men who spend their days unloading trucks and driving forklifts and oiling the gears of the primitive machines on the mechanized lines, and his skin has the same sheen of metallic sweat. From these similarities, Toady figures Dell must have once worked with the other men, but he can’t tell whether Dell wants to rejoin them. Occasionally Dell mutters something—“clucking hens” or “fucking tired” or just “fucking”—but usually he is quiet. Toady senses menace in this quiet. During their fifteen-minute mid-morning and mid-afternoon breaks, Dell loiters alone under a stand of pine trees and smokes a cigarette. He eats his lunch there as well, alone. Toady sits on the hood of his car to eat lunch; he often watches Dell and imagines what must have happened to send him to the stationary lines. A fight. Sharp words spoken, fists clenched, an Exacto blade drawn. There are times, usually in the dead heat of mid-afternoon, when Toady catches himself examining the faces of the forklift operators and the bare forearms of the men on the loading docks, searching for a scar from the cut Dell made with his blade. Sometimes Toady sneaks sideways looks at Dell’s exposed flesh, at his hands and arms and neck, and, when he bends over, the small of his back, trying to find the mark that has set him apart from the other men. But aside from the calluses on his hands and a few strands of violent, wiry hair poking from the places where his flesh folds when he bends, Dell’s skin is smooth and dark beneath its oily film, and Toady is left wanting physical proof of Dell’s difference, of his past violence. Still, Toady has sometimes caught eyes with women working on the line and detected a warning in their glance, a warning he can’t decipher but that he senses is meant to alert him to one fact: Dell is dangerous. This is why he is kept apart from the men, why the men keep their distance. This is why the women defer to him and stroke him with soothing words when he seems particularly tense. Because they know his secret. They know the terrible things of which he is capable.


“Theodore . . .”


There is a delay before Toady looks up, in which he is just able to regret that he was too embarrassed to introduce himself as Toady at the factory. He isn’t sure which of the women cooed his name. They are all looking at him. His finger is wrapped in the ribbon decorating the handle of the basket in front of him, and there are two more baskets beside him. He has fallen behind.


“This one . . . head’s always in the clouds.”


Leona, the retired schoolteacher who is the unofficial manager of the stationary lines, says this with the air of doting chastisement Toady assumes she perfected in the classroom.


“Leave him alone, he’s a good worker.”


There is silence after Dell says this, a pause, and then Toady grabs three blocks of cheddar from the box in the middle of the table and goes to work packing the baskets he let pile up. He blushes at the words spoken in his defense and can’t look up to confirm his feeling that Dell is looking at him, and that all the women, though they have returned to their work, have their feathers raised in warning.


It is drizzling at lunchtime, so Toady abandons the hood and eats in the front seat. He plays the radio softly and hopes he doesn’t kill the battery. Dell isn’t eating under the pine trees, although it appears the branches would keep him sheltered from the light rain. Past the pine trees, on the other side of the train tracks running behind the factory, the tops of four brightly colored golf umbrellas are just visible over the high grass and reeds which border both sides of the railroad embankment and mark the edge of the eighteenth hole of the country club golf course. The umbrellas bob and sway in an indecipherable puppet show, then disappear. On sunny days, Toady eats his lunch accompanied by a chorus of shouts and splashes from the club’s pool, punctuated now and then by the dull crack of a golf ball being teed-off or the hydraulic hiss of a forklift unloading trucks a few dozen feet in front of him. Toady imagines the scene in the clubhouse: a few kids who showed up hoping the rain would die down, his brother probably among them, eating potato chips and watching TV as golfers walk in and shake off rain-slicked windbreakers, tally up their strokes on soggy scorecards. Toady dwells on this conjured tableau with a fascinated intensity, as if it is a newly discovered photograph of some long-forgotten festivity, until the percussive spiel of a used-car salesman blares through the speakers. He snaps the radio off. He is about to take the key out of the ignition when he sees Dell, leaning against the factory between docks three and four, smoking. The glowing tip of his cigarette is dramatic in the day’s gloom. Toady sends the windshield wiper in a single arc across the glass. In the sudden clarity, he is certain that Dell is looking straight at him, and for a moment, Toady doesn’t look away.


Piet balances on the exposed root of an elm tree in the yard. As usual, he is dressed entirely in black, and the light of the street lamp filtering through the leaves hits him only in certain places, making him look, Toady thinks, like a spirit struggling to materialize. Toady stuffs his hands deeper in his pockets when Ethan tells him to relax. He resents Ethan for bringing him here and subjecting him to the moment that is now fast approaching, when he will be tested by Piet on Piet’s own turf. Already, Toady senses Piet’s eyes narrowing and back straightening at the approach of something vulnerable. Toady isn’t sure how to guard against the coming attack.


When Ethan suggested going to the party, Toady regarded the proposal as just another of the ridiculous plans Ethan had been pulling out of his hat all summer. Most of these schemes—like replacing all the menus at Carousel with stolen menus from Lou’s—were self-consciously elaborate and not pursued with any seriousness, so Toady felt it was safe to encourage Ethan’s plotting tonight. But now, with Piet only a few yards away, Toady regrets supporting Ethan’s determination to show up at this party. He sets his jaw against all of Ethan’s directives to loosen up; his teeth grind as he considers the curious, prolonged looks Ethan has been giving the crowd at Lou’s. Toady tries to count the times he has left Carousel early, before Ethan, and wonders what Ethan has been doing when they haven’t been together. It seems that Ethan has already won approval from Piet, that Ethan’s presence here won’t be challenged. In fact, it seems Ethan expects a warm welcome. A vague fear keeps Toady from asking Ethan how this all came about, and Ethan’s unwillingness to volunteer any information, coupled with the confidence in his step, has Toady suspicious and irritated.


When they are close enough to make out the glint of Piet’s eyebrow ring, they stop. Piet and Ethan share a nod, and Piet casts his eye over Toady, who clenches his stomach as if he is about to be hit. Piet asks his question.


“Are you a faggot?”


“I’m here with Ethan, aren’t I?”


Toady, surprised by his quickness and the real venom in his answer, is instantaneously giddy, close to sick, at hearing someone pin down and give voice to that question which has long darted about, playing in his mind and the air between Ethan and him, always disappearing before exposing its true contours. He looks at Ethan, apologetic and hopeful. Ethan smirks in a way that strikes Toady as approving, but this smirk quickly widens to a strange, complicit grin. It occurs to Toady that the half innocent, half bullying tone of Piet’s question was in a register that Ethan himself has been using lately. Piet smiles, wide, and Toady, startled by the pale yellow glow of his teeth, is frustrated by the satisfaction he and Ethan seem to be milking from this complicated moment. Considering their pleasure, Toady is certain that he has somehow betrayed himself by implicating Ethan in his reply to Piet. Just as Toady is gripped by this apprehension, a sudden foreboding of imminent collapse, a dread that his entire universe is a house of cards held together by a thin glue of accumulated assumptions, Piet disappears, swallowed by the night, the relative brightness of his teeth leaving a sickly impression in the blackness that fades as Toady’s disquietude plummets into fear. His fright is only partially relieved when he realizes Piet has not vanished, but has crouched on his root-perch like a tree-dwelling animal about to pounce. Sure enough, in one, smooth, feral gesture, Piet spits a stream of tobacco juice onto the tree, leaps down and licks Toady’s face from his chin to a spot just behind his ear. The metal stud in his tongue is cold and sudden against Toady’s skin. Toady instinctively puts a hand to his cheek, sticky with fast-drying saliva, while Piet, squatting on the ground, emits a low growl, like a dog warning off a challenger. Ethan grabs Toady’s arm, roughly, just beneath the shoulder, and leads him toward the house. Piet barks at them. Ethan holds the door open, and Toady goes inside as Piet howls, long and mournful.


The house is more brightly lit than Toady expected. Curtains or blinds are drawn across all the windows, and from outside the house was distinguished from the darkness only by the porch light flickering over the three oversized wooden numbers of the address, 785, tacked to the brown-stained siding beside the door. But low-wattage, exposed bulbs on the ceiling of almost every room give a washed-out yet emphatic glow to the interior. The kitchen is particularly bright, the overhead light reinforced by a shadeless lamp sitting on a card table doubling as a bar. Scanning the collection of bottles on this table, Toady runs a hand along his face, retracing the path of Piet’s tongue as he mentally retraces Piet’s history. It is a history tangled with this address, dating back to the days when the house, just a block away from Thomas Jefferson Junior High, was notorious among the middle school students for its beer-can and cigarette-butt littered yard, the mean, scraggly cats that lived in the overgrown shrubs out front, and the snowman that appeared in the winter wearing panties instead of a stocking cap, with a carrot and two pieces of charcoal arranged to approximate the male anatomy.


“Hey, Toady.”


Lisa Prue appears and plunges her plastic cup into the bag of ice. Toady knows he shouldn’t be as surprised as he is to see so many familiar faces. In the Carousel Kitchen parking lot everyone might whisper disapprovingly about Piet and the crowd at Lou’s, but among the Carousel regulars, rumors about the goings-on at 785 were long ago replaced by certainties. Toady knows he is in the minority of students to have gone all four years at Jackson without venturing even once to this address.


“Glad Ethan convinced you to come,” Lisa smiles as she struggles to light a cigarette without dropping her drink.


“. . . Yeah.” Toady holds her drink and tries to pick out Ethan’s voice through the static of the party, braving his fast-rising sense of abandonment by focusing on the task.


“Cool. Thanks.” Lisa takes a satisfied drag and offers the cigarette to Toady. He refuses and she smiles, winks and walks away. Marilyn Manson starts playing somewhere upstairs and Toady feels a sickening slipping, the threat of a curtain falling, or rising, the fear that he is the victim of systematic lies. Ethan’s strange interest in the nightly assemblage at Lou’s, his elaborate schemes, his new kind of impatience and sarcasm, these fragments of thoughts, duplicating as though reflected off opposing panels of glass, persistently crowd Toady, as if trying to assemble themselves into a meaningful shape, an explanation for the misgivings lodged like buckshot in his chest. The house is a network of narrow hallways and sticky floors, and as Toady wanders he feels he is a mouse trying to make his way through a maze in which other mice have made their home. Returning to the kitchen, he tries a rickety screen door, all but invisible in a dark nook beside the refrigerator. It opens onto an unlit, screened porch. A large plastic trash can occupies one corner, surrounded by loosely tied black garbage bags that camouflage three or four bean-bag chairs in which people lounge, passing a joint. A sagging couch with ripped cushions exposing disintegrating foam occupies the other corner. Two people are lying on each other on the couch, grinding their hips. Toady releases the screen door and it whips back on its tight hinge and slams shut. The people on the couch glare at him with the quicksilver animosity of two animals interrupted in the midst of mortal combat. The girl on top has long, tangled black hair with bangs cut straight across her forehead; the black mascara and lipstick obscure her features and lend her a pale, androgynous aspect. Ethan lies below her. He grins at Toady, half-wicked, half-shy. The girl’s dark make-up has rubbed off and smeared his upper lip and the skin under his nose, bruising him. Toady sees teeth, bared and dripping. He quickly backs into the kitchen and goes directly to the drink table.


Was he looking at her? Toady rubs the salt off his wrist and watches it fall into the crack between the armrest and the seat cushion.


“Toady, you okay?”


Up to this point, each successive drink had dampened more and more the thoughts jockeying for position in his head, making him feel increasingly aware of the things going on around him. But the world was flipped inside out by the last shot he took, and now the music and conversation are distant and indistinct, and his thoughts are loud, coming one word at a time. He. Was. Looking. At. Her.


“Toady!”


Lisa Prue is offering him a drink, but he ignores her. A uniformed police officer is standing in the doorway. Toady has drunk too much to be afraid, but his face drops in surprise.


“It’s okay, he’s my cousin,” Lisa explains as she thrusts the cup into Toady’s hands, and the cop raises his drink, takes a sip, and disappears down the hall. Lisa follows him, and Toady downs the water he has been given.


Ethan appears and disappears, and Toady loses track of time and falls into a rhythm. Like a child in a pool, content to simply move through the water and experiment with the ways a body can feel alternately heavy and light, Toady wanders through the party caught in a hypnotic cycle of expectation and disappointment. His imagination has been blunted by alcohol, so when Ethan is not by his side he can trust a certain blankness will descend. His mind will not re-create too vividly Ethan’s odd grin, or his laugh. Still, every moment Ethan is not beside him, Toady waits. And each time Ethan comes back, it is without any significance in his step, and when he speaks his tone is flat—normal—and he doesn’t make any reference to the girl with dark make-up. It is when Ethan is standing next to him that Toady is sure, finally, that he doesn’t inspire in Ethan any feeling of muscle-tightening suspension, of possibility, and this certainty unspools his memory, which plays footage that is suddenly painful: a look Ethan once gave him while they were singing along to the radio, the time Ethan playfully ran an ice cube down his back, the “love you, man” Ethan awkwardly spat through his car window just before he drove off to college. Toady prefers, in a way, the forgetfulness he can enjoy when Ethan is absent. Finding that the stench of garbage has finally driven everyone out of the porch, he sits on the broken couch to be alone.


Closing his eyes, Toady is aloft and spinning, so he leaves them open just a crack. He hears voices in the kitchen. Piet and Lisa and someone he doesn’t know. They go away. Somewhere else in the house, the music blares for a second and is gone. A tree branch brushes the porch-screen. There are more whispers in the kitchen. Or are there? Toady opens his eyes completely. Someone is close by, but Toady can’t make sense of anything. He realizes he is about to throw up. A few seconds of intense concentration succeed in dispelling the acute nausea, and as he feels the perspiration gathered on the hair beside his ears, he realizes he is surrounded. People are crammed onto the porch. No one is talking. Someone hits his arm. He looks up, recognizes Ethan, makes room for him on the couch. The girl with dark make-up sits on the floor between Ethan’s legs.


Piet enters stealthily, holding two bottles. One is half full of whiskey, one almost entirely full of a dark red liquid Toady doesn’t recognize. Piet hands the whiskey to someone propped on one of the bean bags, then uncaps the bottle of red stuff and takes a long swig, which sets off a round of muted hisses. He smacks his lips and offers up the bottle. It is taken by a hand that seems unattached to any arm, and then a voice, rising like a plaintive wind, comments on the stench of garbage and is swiftly told to shut up. Piet says, startlingly loud, “It’s cool.”


There is a short, expectant silence, and then Piet continues, more quietly, “Ethan. Shoot, fuck, marry. Mandy Czaplinski, Jenny Sturwitz, Jenny Stern.”


Ethan’s immediate response, “Fuck Jenny Stern, marry Jenny Sturwitz, shoot Mandy,” is met by muffled giggles and groans, and Toady is struck by the impression that everyone is acting out some sort of well-rehearsed routine. He panics, realizing he doesn’t know how to play his part, or even if he has a part to play. He turns to Ethan, who mouths, “The cops.” Toady looks for Lisa Prue, but can’t find her among all the people pressed together in the dark. The whiskey reaches him and he passes it to Ethan without taking a sip. Ethan tosses back a quick swallow. The girl with the make-up drops her head so that it rests on Ethan’s lap. She opens her mouth and Ethan pretends he is about to pour whiskey straight down her throat, then he bends over, wags a playful finger in her face and says, “No more for you.” She grabs the bottle, which Ethan relinquishes as he leans close to Toady and explains, with a harsh edge, “Lisa’s cousin’s talking to them. Relax.”


Toady looks over Ethan’s shoulder, through the screen, and zeroes in on the top of the high flagpole of Thomas Jefferson Junior High School, visible above the roofs of the houses across the street, flashing silver between the streetlights and the moon.


Toady is halfway through the line at the country club brunch buffet when a new pan is brought out and placed in an empty chafing dish in front of him. The blast of steam that escapes when the cover is removed is pungent and milky. Before the steam clears to reveal a mound of scrambled eggs, the back of Toady’s throat constricts; his eyes water as he stumbles in a sick panic to the sideboard, where he sets down his plate and tries to pour a glass of water. A piece of ice lodged in the spout of the pitcher diverts the flow of water into a trickle that dribbles onto his plate and runs down his arm, soaking the cuff of his shirt. Toady gasps at the cold and nearly drops the pitcher, but at the shock, the crisis is past. He succeeds in pouring himself a glass from a different pitcher and after a few sips is breathing with ease, but the sight of his plate—toast and hashbrowns, soggy in spots from the spillage—roils his stomach again. As he steps away from the sideboard, abandoning his plate, he spots his father at a table in the corner, reading the paper. Exhausted by the previous hour at church, spent clutching a missal and trying to swallow away his nausea, and disgusted by the thought of watching his family eat, Toady slips into the hall and out to the patio. The clubhouse chatter and the clatter of silverware diffuse into laughing overtones hung in the humid air. The patio is wet, the mist gathered at the edges of things. His heart beating fast, Toady trots across the damp stone, through a gap in the hedge, over the putting green, past the pool, into the men’s locker room.


Sitting on a bench between two rows of small gray lockers, his eyes closed and his head between his knees, Toady breathes deeply, settling his jitters with the familiar scent of mildew and chlorine. A pleasant tingling in his neck is soon accompanied by a feeling of expansion and relaxation in his stomach. He opens his eyes and savors the sensation of relief. He presses first one foot and then the other into the carpet, perpetually squishy, and recalls past summers, relives tortured minutes in the pool spent dreading the inevitable moment of crisis, when he would no longer be able to hold it. Then he would come in here and walk across the slimy carpet with his bare feet, an unpleasant tingle scurrying up his spine with each footfall. Toady shivers at the thought of these excursions. He looks up at the saloon doors marking the entrance to the urinals and showers. A flutter in his stomach reminds him of the reason why he never put anything on his feet before entering the locker room. Why he never just went in the pool. There was a kind of possibility in the waterlogged carpet and the chill of the tiled bathroom floor, and while this possibility might make him grit his teeth, it also made him tremble with anticipation. It was a generally expectant feeling he still has sometimes, right before he does something that will make him feel guilty.


He treads to the saloon doors, remembering what it was like to stand in front of the urinal, bare-chested, drops of pool-water beading on the hem of his trunks and falling onto his feet. He thinks back to the occasions when, while he peed, he heard the showers running. He is alone in the locker room now, as he usually was on those bare-footed afternoons, but whereas on those afternoons he would feel disappointed in his solitude and sometimes even linger with a vague hope that someone else might come in, now the quiet invites him to contemplate what he might do in a stall or at a urinal. On the verge of stepping through the swinging doors, a memory of the previous night, a memory of Ethan on the couch, partially blocked by the body on top of him, paralyzes Toady; indistinct thoughts regarding Ethan have nagged at him all morning, spiking his hangover with confusion and disappointment, but now these thoughts are amplified. Impatient for an immediate replacement, for something else to excite him with the same kind of tension he enjoyed with Ethan, Toady leaves the locker room.


Without any sunlight glinting off the water or bobbing bodies disturbing the perfect flatness of its surface, Toady can see straight down to the bottom of the deep end of the pool. When he looks up, a gray-white shroud obscures everything more than a hundred yards in front of him. He squints through the haze, trying to see a place beyond the fence, beyond the caddy shack, beyond the red tee boxes of the eighteenth hole. He tries to locate the spot where the manicured grass of the golf course gives way to the wild weeds growing beside the train tracks, and then he narrows his eyes to see beyond the tracks, to the pine trees towering next to the factory parking lot. He is sure of what is in front of him, but can’t see anything through the fog.


The sun beating down on his face lends an orange tint to the darkness behind Toady’s closed eyes. The hood of his car is warm on his back, and he knows what is happening to the turkey sandwich in his hand. The mayonnaise is melting in the heat, and the bread is becoming soft and gooey where his fingers are pressing into it. But he remains still, allowing the sun to fire this moment, to make it hard and strong. He thinks back to the night before, to the way he and Ethan said good-bye in the Carousel Kitchen parking lot. It was casual, barely more prolonged than any other night’s good-bye. It wouldn’t be the last time they saw each other. Ethan even suggested Toady come visit him the next weekend, before the start of classes, but the idea of visiting Ethan had already become abstract and improbable. Toady decides he won’t go. He will tell Ethan he is too busy preparing to leave for school himself. And this excuse won’t be a lie, but Toady knows it will feel like one. Toady feels the weight of uncontrollable forces acting on him and all at once is grasping at straws, trying to come up with a course of action that will somehow put him in the driver’s seat. He sits up and suffers a slight pain, the sensation of a marble rolling from the back of his head to the front, as he opens his eyes. His vision distills slowly, and as the flashes darken and drift away he tries to come up with a number, the number of times in his life he will know he is leaving something behind him for good, the number of times he will be able to mark a moment of definite departure. As he is seized with the desire to at least mark this moment, insignificant as it may be, he sees Dell, leaning between the loading docks, looking at him.


Dell’s skin shines. His short sleeves are rolled to expose his shoulders, glistening like polished fruit. His face is nearly blank, an expression of challenge cancelled out by one of invitation, leaving a tension at the corners of his mouth. Toady reads a promise and a question in this tension, and when Dell turns and walks toward the pine trees, the tension doesn’t break, but extends like a lengthening cord between them, and Toady doesn’t so much follow Dell as get pulled behind him by this rope woven in their mutual stillness and silence.


Dell goes through the pine trees and disappears into the tall grass beside the train tracks. Toady trails him. He halts with one foot in the grass and one on the bed of pine needles, until his foot sinks slightly into the weeds and slides a little forward, and he wades in. The growth is thick. The marshy ground descends steeply into a gully running beside the embankment. The reeds, many of them taller than Toady, are snapped and matted where Dell stepped through them. Toady follows this path and finds Dell standing with his back to a cluster of towering cattails growing at the spot where the soil gives way to the rocky roadbed of the railroad.


Toady meets Dell’s gaze and after a flickering moment takes a few last, slow steps, narrowing the distance until they are close enough to touch each other. The tension warps and quavers, their stillness no longer perfect at this range where every small shift is perceptible. They meet each other’s adjustments, swallow for swallow, sigh for sigh, as if trying to synchronize themselves to find a moment to act by common consent. Toady sees something else now in Dell’s face, in his posture and presence, something urgent, about to spill out of control, and again senses his potential for violence. A trembling in his chest makes it difficult for Toady to breathe, and he exhales, abrupt and loud; Dell meets this with a sharp intake of breath that almost whistles between his teeth, and then he seems to hum a word from his chest, something that sounds like “Yeah,” and his right hand drifts from his side to his thigh, and up, and he extends his thumb and runs it along the ridge running at an angle beneath his fly. Toady looks from fly to face and Dell mouths the words “You want it?” and Toady’s answer, something between yes and no, gets stuck in his throat, and he gags, chokes, and forces his hesitation down into his lungs, to make himself heavy, so that breath after breath he sinks and sinks, but still he’s frantic because the sensation is of rising, of being just on the verge of breaking the surface. He closes his eyes and Dell’s thumbs press against his temples, his cheekbones, the skin between his nose and lip. Dell stretches this skin, peels Toady’s mouth open and for a flashing purple and yellow second Toady smells wood chips, mud, oil and steam and then nothing; he can’t breathe or open his eyes. He’s suffocating, but is paralyzed, as though his mind has been knocked into a separate orbit from his body by a terrifying, slapping, sudden impact with steel or rock or water, so he drifts, riding secret vibrations in the ground until there is a rushing and crashing, like a cascade, like oblivion. The train hurtles past and is gone, and as the dying wind descends on Toady, on every freshly exposed part of him, he opens his eyes, takes a deep breath, and comes back to himself. He is squatting; he kneels, leans back, looks up, holds Dell’s legs for support. The sun, radiating behind Dell’s head, blinds Toady, but before he turns away he discerns a submissive glow in the murky silhouette of Dell’s face, a grin of helpless gratitude. Toady runs his tongue along his teeth, then covers them with his lips and rocks forward, and Dell is in his mouth again. Toady’s head thrums; he’s not sure if he is hearing his own blood circulating or Dell’s, and then the surging, lapping, waves-in-a-conch vibrations coalesce into a rhythmic pounding. As it beats against his tongue, Toady clocks the inevitable thump of Dell’s pulse, and like a rope falling from his neck, the hard knot of Toady’s hunger unravels and unravels and unravels.



© 2005 Tim Mullaney

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